Therapy

topic posted Thu, July 24, 2008 - 6:16 PM by  Brennan
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Iron lies softening in the withering
heat, nesting in coals
and awaiting with patience (or not so much)
that signal shade, the
brightness that ventures just shy of raw sunlight
but only appears
in the oak-shuttered shade of the smithy.
My hammer falls to
no shimmering, sword-movie shower of sparks,
but a satisfied
if strangely muted thud, which means “yes” in the
language of iron.
posted by:
Brennan
Florida
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  • Re: Therapy

    Sun, October 5, 2008 - 4:36 AM
    Wow... What I like is the simple analogy
    of blacksmithing with therapy.
    It would be glib to simply SAY
    that therapy is like smithing
    but the process is the proof.
    Great!

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